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Challenge 1- Anger Clouds the Mind

First off, I want to apologize to greenleofiend, because I was supposed to post this back when I bugged her about a prompt. Real life decided to play havoc with me first. Bleh.

Second, is there anyway we could add Wildwing and Nosedive from Mighty Ducks: The Animated Series to the list of brothers? And, if possible, Nosedive and Grin to the list of brothers not actually related? If either or both of these don't fit, that's fine. I wrote a drabble for Wildwing and Nosedive and then realized they weren't on the list. Heh.

And finally, here's the fic. Enjoy! I'll be posting more, but must get some sleep now. Why must fics take so long to copy from notebook to computer? Guess it doesn't help I messed up the word count...
Edit because whiteowlmiki pointed out I had the wrong ep name. Thanks!
Title: Anger Clouds the Mind
Challenge: 1: Beginnings, EK: include two references to actual canon events
Genre: General
Rating: PG
Characters/Fandom: Raph, Leo/Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Spoilers/Warnings:Some filler eps of the 2k3 series ( “The Lesson” and “Tales of Leo”
Notes: Well, all that fighting had to start somewhere, right?


They had just turned twelve years old. That meant they were practically adults, right? But Master Splinter still refused to let them go topside. It really wasn’t fair to Raph’s mind. He wanted to see what the humans were doing. He longed to explore the rooftops so far above him. The only thing, or rather, the only turtle standing in his way was Leo.

“I said I’m going!” Raph leveled his best glare, which had little effect on his brother. ’Course not. He took on that croc and we were younger then. Just have to find some other way to make him back down!

“No you aren’t, Raph. We were told to stay in the lair.” Leo saw Don and Mike backing off out of the corner of his eye. He didn’t really blame them. Raph had started yelling at him and he no longer seemed like the brother Leo was used too. But Leo clearly remembered the trouble they’d gotten into the last time they’d gotten up the nerve to go topside, and the trouble they’d caused that kid, and he wasn’t going to let Raph repeat the mistakes.

Raph growled and lunged at him, fist pulled back. Leo’s eyes widened in surprise as his body moved automatically to block. Raph’s next attack followed swiftly and before either really knew what happened, they were fighting as they had only done during training before, then rolling on the ground wrestling.

“Raphael! Leonardo!” The sharp voice froze both boys at once. Raph stared up at Leo as fear coursed through his body. What had he done? What had he been thinking, just attacking his brother like that? Swallowing, he turned his head to see Master Splinter looking at both of them. Raph knew that face; it meant lecture and punishment.

Uh-oh…

Comments

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greenleofiend
Jun. 5th, 2009 06:09 pm (UTC)
Awesome drabble!
Tales of Leo, great episode. That was included in the Return to New York DVD, right? I have that one but I don't know where it is. Blah!

This drabble was very nice. Great job. Great emotion.

I will go add those Mighty Ducks characters ASAP as well. I think Eight was meaning to add a few other brothers anyway as well. And me as well, LOL. If you need anymore. Just let us know.

You know, I still have not done Challenge 1. Maybe I shall work on that. And well, Challenge 13 too of course. (I am missing a couple more I believe) Looking for more soon.
robina1984
Jun. 6th, 2009 12:39 am (UTC)
Re: Awesome drabble!
It was a good ep. And yeah, that's the disk it's on.

Thank you very much!

Yay! Thank you very much!

I plan on getting every drabble with TMNT and MD:TAS. Soon as I can get them typed up...almost worse than writer's block!
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